I really like this version of it. It looks fantastic! I love your colors. I like the color scheme of this one better... I dunno. It just kinda flows better, I think.
I liked the warm colors of #1 but I also like the way you cleaned and and straighted the lines on this one. It looks less like a colored drawing and more like a spaceship.
yeah i spent a lot more time on the highlights and stuck in additional details to empahsise the lineart. also i'm really pleased with the background planet - that's what bugged me about the original - it look too fake - now it looks way better with some texture applied and the star looks better as a gas giant - i tried making a better star, with plumes and flares, but it looked baws
Awesome work, stud!